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The Champion of Gothic ~ Concurs
Robi Offline
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#121
01-08-2013, 01:14 AM
Nu gasesc rima in ultimu versHaha..
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01-08-2013, 01:30 AM
I like that. A fost ceva mai liric decat comedia facuta de noiHaha.
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#123
01-08-2013, 01:32 AM
(01-08-2013, 01:30 AM)Ionutzel Wrote: I like that. A fost ceva mai liric decat comedia facuta de noiHaha.
Daca nu e comedie, tot degeaba..Haha
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01-08-2013, 01:35 AM (This post was last modified: 01-08-2013, 01:44 AM by Bogdan.)
Ca sa sune bine, o poezie nu trebuie sa aiba neaparat o rima sau o masura echilibrata. Versurile pot devenii mai melodioase si prin alte procedee stilistice: ritmul si aliteratia in primul rand, si cam orice figura de stil in al doilea. Just sayin, in caz ca vreti sa compuneti ceva si nu va iese, sa va uitati si in alta parte, nu numai la ultimele silabe din vers.
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01-08-2013, 01:40 AM (This post was last modified: 01-08-2013, 01:43 AM by Robi.)
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#126
01-08-2013, 11:49 AM
(01-08-2013, 01:35 AM)Bogdan Wrote: Ca sa sune bine, o poezie nu trebuie sa aiba neaparat o rima sau o masura echilibrata. Versurile pot devenii mai melodioase si prin alte procedee stilistice: ritmul si aliteratia in primul rand, si cam orice figura de stil in al doilea. Just sayin, in caz ca vreti sa compuneti ceva si nu va iese, sa va uitati si in alta parte, nu numai la ultimele silabe din vers.

Sau pot sa nu fie nici melodioase, daca compenseaza prin altceva.. sau vor sa exprime altceva. Dar trebuie munca multa pentru ca sa faci 3 strofe de calitate, nu cateva minute cat am stat eu. Cred ca daca as sta mult timp, ar trebui sa iasa...
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#127
01-08-2013, 01:16 PM
Sper sa va placa:

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#128
01-08-2013, 01:25 PM
Macar a lui Hegan rimeaza, spre deosebire de a meaHaha.
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#129
01-08-2013, 01:27 PM
Ma simt flatatSmile. A ta rimeaza Roby. Exista mai multe forme de rima. Imbratisata, monorima, imperecheata, incrucisata.
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#130
01-08-2013, 01:40 PM
Rima alba parca e aia folosita de mineHaha.
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